Should we create more socially mixed residential areas, where rich people live next to poorer people, instead of in separate communities?
In Brazil, and to be
specific, in São Paulo city, having very rich neighborhoods close than
extremely poor neighborhoods is a reality. As an example that can be mentioned
is the Morumbi, a rich neighborhood, place known for the huge houses and fancy
buildings. Although, Morumbi is also known to be localized near by a large poor
community, the Paraisopolis favela. The contrast of those two neighborhoods is
the picture of social inequality at country.
This question is not too
easy to be answered. After read the question quickly, the first answer that
happened in my mind was: ‘yes, of course should have more socially mixed
residential areas’. But, if you stop and re-read the question, with more
attention, might you will be face a uncomfortable feeling inside your head and
probably would question yourself: should have very different type of habitation
from another one, that we need to wonder whether they can share the same places
to each other? To me, this question should be answered as no.
Admittedly, the social
inequality is a reality for countries in development, as Brazil. But this scenario
can change, and I believe it will. If the government invest to reduces the
social differences, creating politics incentives and favoring the economic
situation on poor neighborhoods, to get better places to live, socially mixed
residential areas will be our future reality, where all people will have a
decent life, with the same opportunities, and less social contrasts.
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